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Storytelling

How to write a story

It is much more difficult to write a story than any other text you might tackle. Thankfully, we have many storytellers eager to share how-to information with aspiring storytellers. To prepare this article, I used;

Stories are about people and what people value. Stories follow a quest pattern which goes something like this —

Once upon a time, the subject of the story has a goal but something or someone is standing in the way of achieving that goal. Initial attempts to get around obstacles make the situation worse. Eventually, the subject learns enough about himself or his situation to find a way around the obstacles. He reaches his goal and shares what he knows with others. Then — they all live happily ever after.

Think of every story you know. Does it fit this quest pattern. The best ones do. Plan your story using this pattern, and it will likely stay on track. According to Rubie, pages 12-13, to write a successful story, you must do these things:

  1. Introduce the main character of the story. To whom is the story happening? What has happened in this character's life to bring on a crisis? Start the story with the crisis.
  2. Show what virtues or flaws are making this character's situation worse. Why is the situation seemingly hopeless.
  3. Show how the character has changed. What has he learned that enables him to finally solve his problem? How can others be helped by the solution?

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Sample Quest Patterns

I don't mean to trivialize the process of storytelling or any other writing. I understand the challenge and, on this site, I only introduce organization patterns for writing. Stories are usually organized by the quest pattern. Allow me to introduce you.

Start by reviewing the Quest pattern. (Click the appropriate tab.) Then ,for practice, find how the quest pattern is used in these stories;

  • Novel: A Christmas Carol, by Charles Dickens

    You can read this novel for free at Project Gutenberg external link.

    Witness one man's journey from self-destruction, because he fears the world too much, to resurrection by remembrance of joy. You don't have to celebrate Christmas to enjoy this Christmas story: but it doesn't hurt. Ebenezer Scrooge has been showing us how to keep Christmas well since 1843.

  • Short Story: A Pup Named Chaos

    I wrote a very short story to include with Drill 01 — the first lesson of the Word Drills section of the site. I tried to include as many words from drill 1 as I could fit in the story.

    Later, in the Grammar section of the site, I analyzed the effectiveness of the story paragraphs. Guess what? The paragraphs were not very effective. The story did not flow well because the story was not planned out as a story ought to be.

    I used the quest pattern to plan and rewrite Chasing Chase. You can read the new story here — a Pup Named Chaos. See if you can summarize the new version according to the quest pattern. Click the above tab to see my story plan.